The next time you
find yourself not reading every word, take advantage of the
opportunity. Try to figure what went wrong – why this passage
doesn't hold your attention:
● The author stepped
away from dramatization and dumped a long passage of summary or
backstory.
● She let a character
deliver a speech.
● He wants to explain
something in numbing detail.
● She spent too many
pages exploring a subplot instead of advancing the story.
Whatever the
problems, store them in a self-editor's checklist, and use that list
to examine the nearly complete pages of your work in progress.
If you're
fortunate, you'll find pages to revise. But don't trust yourself. You
have blind spots – especially about your own work.
That's where beta
readers come in. Or they should.
I doubt the author
of the nonfiction manuscript I recently edited used beta readers. Or
heeded their advice. Most of Chapter 2 expounded basic information
his target readers should already know. It interrupted the flow
between Chapters 1 and 3, and he'd done nothing to set it in context.
He was impassioned
about the information, and the entire chapter sat squarely in his
blind spot. After a paragraph or two, readers will skim. If the
author is fortunate, they'll peek ahead to Chapter 3 – and check
back in.
If you've secured
an agent and anticipate traditional publishing, you're working with a
safety net that independent authors may bypass. But you're working
with gatekeepers who set the bar high.
They'll expect
you're aware of your biggest blind spots—and have taken steps to
address them.
There's no point in
writing words your audience will want to skim.
4 comments:
I am definitely going to recommend this when I teach my workshop on Self- editing. Great post Andy. Authors are their own worst editor.
Am doing this right now with a novel nominated for a Pulitzer. I have to skip and skim so much. He gets a bit of a pass because it's def literary fiction, but still, enough is enough. I'd be lost without critters who help catch these things.
Of course the list of problems I cited is not exhaustive, but just the dangerous tip of the iceberg.
So true that no one else in the universe reads my "baby" in the same self-adoring way I do. It's painful to have a good friend say that a subplot has gone astray or missed the mark, but that gives me the opportunity to do necessary surgery. Your blog is spot-on, Andy.
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