Amazon
has quickly changed everything we understand about the literary industry. The
obvious e-book is one example, the faster paced society is another.
Writers
are struggling to keep up with what and how their stories are to be told. Gone
are the days when an individual sits at the typewriter and tells his or her own
story without critique partners keeping them honest, editors with less time to
give it in the end, and publishers without publishing dollars for a new author.
Add in
a society that wants instant gratification, and you have a whole new world to
be writing for. One of the classes I teach is on smacking the reader over the
head with a two by four on page one. Why? Because that’s often all an agent or
editor will look at to decide whether or not they want to consider a project,
and also because readers want to be instantly drawn in. If they aren’t, bye-bye
book sale.
So
what is the next situation that has emerged to change the way a writer writes?
THE
SAMPLE…
You
know you have a few pages to get the reader’s attention. Will that change the
way you write the book? We all want each page to keep the reader turning, or
sliding, or tapping. But will this force writers to give it their all for a few
pages, then slow the pace?
First
we said to smack the reader right side the head for 5-10 pages. “It had better
be your best writing.” Then we told them they had one page to get it right.
Now, for the reader, how many pages is it going to take to get them to “go to
the store and buy this book”?
The
answer is far more simple than you would think and more difficult all at the
same time.
Write
a great book from page one to page…400 or whatever. You need to get the reader’s
attention right away, but you can’t afford to let the story slide. If your
reader decides a glass of lemonade would taste good enough to put down the
book, then you’ve allowed them a “commercial break” and there should never be
commercial breaks in a great book. Don’t give them one second when they feel
comfortable enough about what is happening to your heroine that they can leave
her alone for even a second.
So who
are you writing for? An amazing page for agents and editors? A few awesome
pages for contests and samples?
Or are
you writing full out for the reader who wants an outstanding book from page one
to the end?
2 comments:
I truly lke the brisk, honest approach to informing writers of the bare facts. You've accomplished this without tons of paragraphs! Thanks.
Thank you, Shirley
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